應徵工作信(Job Application Letter)是 IELTS General Training Task 1 出現頻率最高的 formal 子題之一。題目典型形式:

You have seen an advertisement for a part-time position at a local hotel. Write a letter to the manager.

幾乎每年都有變體——應徵咖啡廳、夏令營輔導員、書店店員、行銷助理。語氣一律 formal——你跟對方沒見過面。

本篇假設你已經看過 Formal Letter 深度解析

應徵信典型 bullet 結構

題目 bullet 幾乎固定這三項:

  1. say where you saw the advertisement — 你是從哪裡看到職缺
  2. explain why you are suitable for the job — 為什麼你適合
  3. say when you would be able to start — 你何時可以上工

考生常犯錯:把 bullet 1 寫成一行就跳過、bullet 2 寫成「I am hardworking and I love this job」這種空話。三個 bullet 字數應接近平均——每個 bullet 約 50 字。

9 組求職專屬句型

| 中文 | 英文 | |---------------------|----------------------------------------------------------------| | 我寫信來應徵 | I am writing to apply for the position of... | | 在貴公司網站看到的 | I came across the advertisement on your company's website... | | 我目前任職於 | I am currently employed as... | | 我相信我的經驗使我 | I believe my experience makes me well-suited for this role. | | 附件是我的履歷 | Please find attached my up-to-date CV for your consideration. | | 我可以從...開始上工 | I would be available to commence work from the 1st of June. | | 樂意參加面試 | I would welcome the opportunity to attend an interview. | | 期待您的回覆 | I look forward to hearing from you in due course. | | 如有任何疑問請聯繫 | Please do not hesitate to contact me should you require... |

162 字完整範文(逐段解析)

題目You have seen an advertisement for a part-time receptionist at a city hotel. Write a letter to the manager.

  • say where you saw the advertisement
  • explain why you are suitable
  • say when you could start

Dear Sir or Madam,

[§1 目的 + bullet 1 來源] I am writing to apply for the position of part-time receptionist at the Riverside Hotel, which I came across on the Taipei Career Hub website on the 18th of April.

[§2 bullet 2 為何適合 — 具體經驗] I am currently a final-year hospitality student at Shih Chien University and have completed two summer internships at boutique hotels in Tainan, where I handled check-ins, guest enquiries, and basic bookkeeping. I am fluent in Mandarin and English, with intermediate Japanese, and I am confident I could manage the front desk during evening shifts effectively.

[§3 bullet 3 何時可上工 + CV] I would be available to commence work from the 5th of May and could comfortably cover up to twenty hours per week around my final classes. Please find attached my up-to-date CV for your consideration.

[§4 收尾] I would welcome the opportunity to attend an interview. I look forward to hearing from you in due course.

Yours faithfully, Lin Yu-hsuan

字數:162。三個 bullet 完整覆蓋,formal 語氣一致,用了 I am writing to apply, Please find attached, I look forward to hearing from you — 三個求職黃金句型。

台灣考生應徵信最常見錯誤

錯誤 1:吹噓但沒證據

I am very hardworking and responsible — examiner 看到這種形容詞清單就扣分。改成具體事實I have completed two summer internships at...

錯誤 2:直接附件 Please see my CV

太突兀。標準 formal 寫法:Please find attached my up-to-date CV for your consideration.

錯誤 3:可上工日期含糊

I can start anytime soon → 太隨便。改成 I would be available to commence work from the 5th of May. — 給具體日期

錯誤 4:結尾用 I really hope you will hire me

求職焦慮讀得出來,扣分。改成 I would welcome the opportunity to attend an interview. — 自信而禮貌。

自我練習

寫一封 160 字 formal 信應徵當地書店的兼職店員——你是大學生,週末可以上工,會中英日三語,曾在獨立書店打工兩個月。

檢查表:

  • [ ] Dear Sir or Madam, + Yours faithfully,
  • [ ] 三個 bullet 字數平均
  • [ ] 至少 4 個求職句型
  • [ ] CV 提及句型正確
  • [ ] 上工日期具體

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