感謝信(Thank-you Letter)在 IELTS General Task 1 通常是 semi-formal——對象是老師、實習主管、鄰居、朋友的家長。語氣親切但不過度親密。

題目典型形式:

A friend of yours helped you during a difficult time. Write a letter to thank them.

或:

Your former teacher wrote a reference letter for your university application. Write to thank them.

先看 Semi-Formal Letter 深度解析 掌握 register。

感謝信典型 bullet 結構

  1. say what you are thanking them for — 具體感謝什麼(不要籠統)
  2. explain why it meant a lot to you — 為什麼重要(情感層次)
  3. say what your plans are now — 你接下來要做什麼

bullet 2 最容易被簡化成「Thank you so much, I really appreciate it」這種空話。Band 7+ 寫 bullet 2 要連結到具體後果:因為你的 reference letter,我才被錄取/我才有勇氣換工作/我才能撐過那段時間。

9 組感謝信必備句型

| 中文 | 英文 | |---------------------|---------------------------------------------------------------| | 我必須寫信感謝您 | I felt I had to write and thank you properly for... | | 您的善意意義非凡 | Your kindness meant more to me than you can imagine. | | 沒有您的幫助 | Without your help, I genuinely doubt I would have... | | 我永遠不會忘記 | I will never forget that... | | 您給我的不只是 | What you gave me was not just X, but Y. | | 我終於能告訴您 | I am delighted to be able to tell you that... | | 接下來幾個月我打算 | Over the coming months, I plan to... | | 期待親自當面致謝 | I hope to thank you in person before too long. | | 再次致上深深感謝 | Please accept my heartfelt thanks once again. |

160 字完整範文(逐段解析)

題目You recently completed an internship and your manager was very supportive. Write a letter to thank them.

  • say what you are thanking them for
  • explain what their support meant to you
  • say what you plan to do next

Dear Ms Robinson,

[§1 開場 + bullet 1 具體感謝] I hope this finds you well. I felt I had to write and thank you properly for the extraordinary support you gave me throughout my three-month internship at Marston & Co, and especially for the time you took every Friday afternoon to review my work in detail.

[§2 bullet 2 — 為什麼重要] Your patience taught me how to think like an analyst rather than just a graduate looking busy. The feedback on my client memo in week six in particular changed how I approach writing entirely. Without your steady mentorship, I genuinely doubt I would have had the confidence to apply for graduate roles this soon.

[§3 bullet 3 — 接下來計畫] I am delighted to be able to tell you that I have just accepted a junior analyst position at a Taipei consultancy, starting in September. Over the coming months, I plan to keep building the analytical habits you modelled, and I hope to make you proud of the reference you gave me.

[§4 收尾] I hope to thank you in person before too long.

Yours sincerely, Hsiao Pei-yu

字數:160。三個 bullet 平均、感謝具體(每週五下午 review、第六週的 client memo)、bullet 3 連到具體錄取結果。

台灣考生感謝信常見錯誤

錯誤 1:感謝過於籠統

Thank you for everything, you helped me a lot, you are the best teacher — 全是空話、零內容。改成具體事件:especially for the time you took every Friday afternoon to review my work

錯誤 2:把 bullet 2 寫成 bullet 1 的同義反覆

bullet 1 已說「謝謝您的支持」、bullet 2 又寫「我很感謝您的支持」——examiner 看到重複論點扣分。Bullet 2 必須深一層:那個支持改變了你什麼能力 / 什麼觀念 / 什麼選擇

錯誤 3:bullet 3 寫成「希望您身體健康萬事如意」

中文書信慣用語直譯失敗。Bullet 3 是你的計畫——告訴對方你接下來要做什麼,這才是延續關係的合理收尾。

錯誤 4:過度誇張

You changed my life forever, I owe you everything I am — 太重。Semi-formal 感謝信的最高情感等級是 I will never forget that...,不要再往上飆。

自我練習

寫一封 155 字 semi-formal 感謝信給你高中老師 Mr Lin——他幫你寫大學推薦信、你已被第一志願錄取、你計畫上大學後保持聯繫。

檢查表:

  • [ ] Dear Mr Lin, + Yours sincerely,
  • [ ] 感謝具體(不只「謝謝您」)
  • [ ] bullet 2 連到具體影響
  • [ ] bullet 3 是真正的 plan,不是客套話
  • [ ] 沒有縮寫

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