表格題格子最多——5 列 × 4 欄 = 20 個數字。寫完一定爆量。本篇用五國各產業平均薪資示範「列冠軍 + 行冠軍」兩條主線選 main features，並處理 command / lag behind / a wage premium 三組薪資題招牌詞。
題目與數據
The table below gives information about average annual wages, in US dollars, for four industries in five countries in 2023. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
資料（單位：USD per year）：
| 國家 | 金融 Finance | 科技 Tech | 製造 Manufacturing | 餐飲服務 Hospitality | |--------------|--------------|-----------|---------------------|----------------------| | 瑞士 Switzerland | 130,000 | 115,000 | 75,000 | 45,000 | | 美國 USA | 105,000 | 120,000 | 60,000 | 30,000 | | 德國 Germany | 85,000 | 80,000 | 65,000 | 32,000 | | 巴西 Brazil | 35,000 | 30,000 | 18,000 | 9,000 | | 越南 Vietnam | 22,000 | 19,000 | 12,000 | 5,500 |
完整範文（170 字）
¹ The table presents average annual earnings, in US dollars, for workers in four industries — finance, technology, manufacturing and hospitality — across five countries in 2023.
² Overall, the three high-income economies paid substantially more than the two emerging ones in every sector, while finance and technology consistently commanded the highest wages and hospitality the lowest, regardless of country.
³ Switzerland topped the table in three of the four industries, with finance workers earning USD 130,000, around six times the equivalent Swiss-Vietnamese gap. ⁴ The United States was the exception, paying its tech workers slightly more than Switzerland at USD 120,000, reflecting the dominance of the American technology sector.
⁵ German wages were noticeably more compressed across industries, ranging only from USD 32,000 to USD 85,000, whereas Brazil and Vietnam lagged far behind, with their finance workers earning roughly a quarter and a sixth of Swiss levels respectively. ⁶ Hospitality consistently came bottom, dipping as low as USD 5,500 in Vietnam — barely a tenth of the global finance average shown.
句句 Band Descriptor 解析
- 句 1 — Task Achievement: average annual earnings... for workers in four industries... across five countries — 列 + 行 + 單位一次交代。
- 句 2 — Task Achievement (Overview): 行冠軍（finance/tech 最高、hospitality 最低）+ 列冠軍（高所得國 vs 新興國）—— 表格題 overview 必須涵蓋兩個維度。
- 句 3 — Grammar Range: Switzerland topped the table in three of the four industries + with finance workers earning... around six times the equivalent Swiss-Vietnamese gap — with 結構帶比例。
- 句 4 — Lexical: was the exception, paying its tech workers slightly more — 例外用 was the exception 比 however 精準。
- 句 5 — Lexical: more compressed across industries — compressed 描述「差距小」非常學術。
- 句 6 — Coherence: consistently came bottom + barely a tenth of the global finance average — 用 barely a tenth 結尾強化全表落差。
10 組高分詞彙
| Phrase | 中文 | |--------|------| | command the highest wages | 享有最高薪資 | | lag (far) behind | （遠遠）落後 | | a wage premium of | …的薪資溢價 | | top the table in | 在…中名列首位 | | roughly a quarter / a sixth of | 約為…的四分之一／六分之一 | | more compressed across industries | 跨產業差距更小 | | consistently came bottom | 一貫敬陪末座 | | dipping as low as | 低至 | | the equivalent X-Y gap | X 與 Y 的對應差距 | | barely a tenth of | 僅有…的十分之一 |
本篇避開的常見錯誤
錯誤：把 20 個數字全描述一遍。 表格題逐欄逐列寫完，字數一定超過 200，焦點全失，Coherence 卡 6.0。
本範文的選點策略——只挑 6 個數字當「主角」：
- 冠軍：Switzerland finance 130,000（全表最高）
- 例外：USA tech 120,000（唯一壓過 Switzerland）
- 倒數冠軍：Vietnam hospitality 5,500（全表最低）
- 比較錨點：Germany 32k–85k（中段範圍）+ Brazil/Vietnam finance（用 quarter/sixth 比較）
其餘 14 個數字一律不出現具體值，只用 consistently / regardless of country / generally 帶過。少寫具體數字 = 多寫比較——這是表格題拿 Band 7 的鐵律。