Band 7+ 的 essay 不只是「正確」——是有節奏。同一個觀點,一句平鋪直敘能講,但如果你能強調關鍵詞、調整句子重心,讀起來立刻從 Band 6.5 跳 Band 7.5。
分裂句(Cleft Sentences)是英文裡唯一為「強調」而存在的語法結構。三型——It-cleft, What-cleft, All-cleft——學會後你可以把任何一句普通句改成有重心、有節奏的學術句。
為什麼分裂句能加分
Band 7 評分描述:uses a variety of complex structures。大多數考生的「複雜句」只有三板斧——relative clauses、conditionals、passive。分裂句是第四把武器,而且幾乎沒人用。
Examiner 讀到 What really matters is... / It was only in 2015 that... / All we need is... 會立刻在心裡標記:這個考生掌握強調結構——Band 7+。
三型分裂句速覽
| 型 | 結構 | 強調重點 | |--------|-----------------------------------|-------------------| | It-cleft | It is/was X that/who ... | 某個名詞、時間、原因 | | What-cleft | What ... is/was X | 整個資訊束、動作 | | All-cleft | All (that) ... is/was X | 「唯一、僅僅」之意 |
型 1:It-cleft
It + be + 強調詞 + that/who + 其餘子句
把句子切成兩半——It is 後面放你要強調的東西,that 後面放其他資訊。
Social media shapes teenage self-image. → It is social media that shapes teenage self-image.(強調:是社群媒體,不是其他)
Governments must act now. → It is governments who must act now.(強調:是政府,不是個人)
Taiwan introduced universal healthcare in 1995. → It was in 1995 that Taiwan introduced universal healthcare.(強調:時間)
型 2:What-cleft
What + 主詞 + 動詞 ... + is/was + 強調詞
把整個資訊束包裝到前面——讓 is 後面的那個字「落在重音上」。
We need stronger regulation. → What we need is stronger regulation.
The policy failed to address rural poverty. → What the policy failed to address was rural poverty.
This approach does not solve the root cause. → What this approach fails to do is solve the root cause.
型 3:All-cleft
All (that) + 主詞 + 動詞 ... + is/was + 強調詞
意思是「唯一、僅僅」——語氣比 What-cleft 更強。
All students need is basic digital literacy — anything beyond that is a bonus.
All the government has done so far is publish a consultation document.
All that truly matters in this debate is whether outcomes improve.
使用時機表
| 情境 | 建議型 | 範例 | |-----------------------------|---------------|----------------------------------------------------------------| | Task 2 強調關鍵因素 | It-cleft | It is economic inequality that drives these trends. | | Task 2 點出問題根源 | What-cleft | What is often overlooked is the long-term cost. | | Task 2 反駁一個觀點 | All-cleft | All this policy achieves is a temporary delay. | | Task 1 強調時間點 | It-cleft | It was between 2010 and 2015 that the sharpest rise occurred. | | Speaking Part 3 強調想法 | What-cleft | What I really think is that education matters most. |
台灣考生最常見錯誤
錯誤 1:把 It-cleft 跟虛主詞 it 搞混
❌ It is important that governments act.(這是虛主詞句,不是分裂句,沒加分) ✓ It is governments that must act — not individuals alone.(It-cleft,強調主詞)
規則:分裂句的 It is 後面必須接可強調的具體詞(名詞、時間、地點)——不是形容詞或整個 that 子句。
錯誤 2:What-cleft 後面時態不匹配
❌ What we need are addressing root causes. ✓ What we need is to address root causes. ✓ What we need is a serious plan to address root causes.
規則:What-cleft 後面接 is/was + 名詞片語 / to-不定詞。
錯誤 3:All-cleft 用得太頻繁
All-cleft 帶有「只不過、僅僅」的貶抑或簡化語氣——一篇 280 字 essay 最多用 1 次。連用兩次讀起來像抱怨。
節奏建議:一篇塞幾個?
| 長度 | 建議分裂句用量 | |---------------|----------------| | Speaking 回答 | 0-1 個(自然) | | Task 1(150字)| 1 個(強調時間)| | Task 2(280字)| 2-3 個(每段最多 1 個)|
千萬不要每段都塞——Examiner 會察覺你在表演。跟 被動語態 同原則:多樣、少量、精準。
Before / After 對照
Band 6.5 平鋪
Climate change is caused by human activity. Governments need to act. Individuals also matter. The most important thing is reducing emissions.
四個直陳句——訊息都到了,但節奏平板。
Band 7.5 加入 2 個分裂句
What drives climate change is fundamentally human activity, and it is governments, not individuals alone, who possess the tools to change course. Individual action matters, of course; yet all that personal choices can achieve without policy support is a slow and partial reduction in emissions.
同樣的觀點——加了 What-cleft + It-cleft + All-cleft 後,有重心、有對比、有節奏。
10 題自測
將下列句子改寫為指定型分裂句。
- (It-cleft, 強調 the internet)The internet transformed global communication.
- (It-cleft, 強調時間)Taiwan abolished martial law in 1987.
- (What-cleft)We should focus on long-term outcomes.
- (What-cleft)The report ignored the rural population.
- (All-cleft)The policy merely postponed the problem.
- (It-cleft, 強調 poverty)Poverty, not culture, explains these outcomes.
- (What-cleft)I admire her honesty most.
- (All-cleft)Students only require basic guidance.
- (It-cleft, 強調地點)The protests began in Taipei.
- (What-cleft)Schools must teach critical thinking.
解答
- It was the internet that transformed global communication.
- It was in 1987 that Taiwan abolished martial law.
- What we should focus on is long-term outcomes.
- What the report ignored was the rural population.
- All that the policy achieved was postponing the problem.
- It is poverty, not culture, that explains these outcomes.
- What I admire most about her is her honesty.
- All students require is basic guidance.
- It was in Taipei that the protests began.
- What schools must teach is critical thinking.
自我檢查:每個分裂句是否強調了最關鍵的資訊?強錯位置反而像語法練習——Examiner 會察覺。
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