Band 7+ 的 Task 2 essay 幾乎都有一個特徵:

在支持自己的論點時,承認反方有一定道理——然後反駁。

Band 6.5 的 essay:一邊倒、沒有對立。

The "but" test:你的 essay 有沒有 but / however / that said / nevertheless 這類對立轉折?沒有 → 大概卡 6.5。

為什麼 Band 7 要有對立

Band 7 的 Task Response 評分明寫:

Presents a position throughout, but this may not always be clear; may over-generalise.

Band 8 則是:

Presents a well-developed response with relevant, extended and supported ideas.

Well-developed = 能看到議題的兩面、能解釋為什麼自己的立場還是贏。一邊倒 = under-developed。

怎麼加對立(兩個 pattern)

Pattern 1:承認 + 反駁(Concession-Rebuttal)

Admittedly, [opponent's point]. However, [why your position still stronger].

It is true that [opponent's point]. That said, [your counter-argument].

Critics argue that [opponent's point]. While this concern has some merit, [why you're still right].

放在:body §2 或 §3 的中段。

Pattern 2:雙重條件(Nuance)

In most cases, [your main claim]. Nevertheless, this does not apply when [exception].

Broadly speaking, [main claim]. However, there is one important qualification: [caveat].

放在:body 結尾,顯示思慮周密。

範例對照

❌ 一邊倒(Band 6.5)

Compulsory uniforms are a good idea. They reduce bullying. They also save money for parents. Moreover, they create equality among students. In conclusion, uniforms should be compulsory.

邏輯 OK,但沒有深度。所有句子都順向——讀完感覺作者只看到一面。

✅ 有對立(Band 7+)

Compulsory uniforms bring clear benefits: they reduce appearance-based bullying, cut clothing costs for families, and promote a sense of shared identity.

Critics often counter that uniforms suppress individual expression. This concern has some merit, particularly for older teenagers. However, the scope for self-expression through hairstyles, accessories, and extra-curricular choices remains considerable — and the collective benefits of reduced social pressure arguably outweigh the cost to individual style in the school context.

On balance, therefore, I believe uniforms should be mandatory at the primary and lower-secondary level.

結論相同(支持 uniform),但對話了反方——讀起來 well-developed。

最小可行對立

如果整篇加對立太難——就在 §3 加 2 句

Admittedly, there are valid concerns about ___. Yet ___ remains the stronger case because ___.

3 句話 + 1 個對立 = 立即差別。

試試看

找你最近一篇 Task 2。用 Ctrl+F 搜尋:

  • however / but / that said / admittedly / nevertheless

完全沒出現 → 加一個。建議在 §3 寫完後加 2 句 concession-rebuttal。

這個單一修改常常讓 essay 從 6.5 跳到 7.0。


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