IELTS Task 1 跟 Task 2 都要求paraphrase 題目寫進 intro。

學生版:

The line graph shows the number of tourists in Spain from 1990 to 2020. 照抄開頭The line graph shows the number of tourists...

這些字不算字數——照抄扣分。

3 字法則

連續超過 3 個字跟題目一樣 = 算抄襲 = 不計字數。

例子:

  • the line graph shows4 字照抄 → 扣
  • illustrates how tourist numbers原題沒出現過 → 安全
  • from 1990 to 2020數字可以照抄(專有名詞不算)

專有名詞、日期、機構名不算——Spain / 1990 / UNESCO 可以照抄。

怎麼 paraphrase

法 1:換動詞(最快)

題目:The graph shows...

Paraphrase:

  • The graph illustrates...
  • The graph depicts...
  • The graph presents...
  • The graph compares...(多組資料時)
  • The graph breaks down...(分類資料時)

法 2:換名詞

題目:the number of tourists

Paraphrase:

  • tourist numbers
  • visitor figures
  • the volume of tourism
  • the quantity of visitors

法 3:重構句型

題目:The line graph shows the number of tourists visiting Spain from 1990 to 2020.

Band 7 paraphrase: The line graph illustrates how tourist figures in Spain changed over a thirty-year period between 1990 and 2020.

差別:

  • showsillustrates how ___ changed (重構句型)
  • the number of touriststourist figures (換名詞)
  • from 1990 to 2020over a thirty-year period between 1990 and 2020 (加細節)

Task 2 的 paraphrase

題目:Some people believe technology is making children lazy. Do you agree or disagree?

❌ 學生版

Some people believe technology is making children lazy. I agree.

完全沒 paraphrase。Intro Band 5.5。

✅ Band 7 版

There is a widely held view that the rise of digital technology is eroding children's motivation and effort. In my opinion, this concern is largely justified, though it requires some nuance.

改動:

  • Some people believeThere is a widely held view that
  • technology is making children lazythe rise of digital technology is eroding children's motivation and effort

專有名詞怎麼辦

國家名、公司名、疾病名、科目名——必須照抄,不能瞎改:

  • Japan 不要改成 that East Asian nation(做作)
  • NHS 不要改成 UK's health service(失精準)

規則:3 字法則不適用於專有名詞

試試看

拿一題 Task 2 題目。在空白紙上把題目重寫三個版本

  1. 只換動詞
  2. 只換名詞
  3. 完全重構句型

寫完對比——哪個最自然?把它背起來當標準 paraphrase。


深入閱讀:Task 2 Opinion Band 7+ 完整範文