IELTS Task 1 跟 Task 2 都要求paraphrase 題目寫進 intro。
學生版:
The line graph shows the number of tourists in Spain from 1990 to 2020. 照抄開頭:The line graph shows the number of tourists... ❌
這些字不算字數——照抄扣分。
3 字法則
連續超過 3 個字跟題目一樣 = 算抄襲 = 不計字數。
例子:
- the line graph shows → 4 字照抄 → 扣
- illustrates how tourist numbers → 原題沒出現過 → 安全
- from 1990 to 2020 → 數字可以照抄(專有名詞不算)
專有名詞、日期、機構名不算——Spain / 1990 / UNESCO 可以照抄。
怎麼 paraphrase
法 1:換動詞(最快)
題目:The graph shows...
Paraphrase:
- The graph illustrates...
- The graph depicts...
- The graph presents...
- The graph compares...(多組資料時)
- The graph breaks down...(分類資料時)
法 2:換名詞
題目:the number of tourists
Paraphrase:
- tourist numbers
- visitor figures
- the volume of tourism
- the quantity of visitors
法 3:重構句型
題目:The line graph shows the number of tourists visiting Spain from 1990 to 2020.
Band 7 paraphrase: The line graph illustrates how tourist figures in Spain changed over a thirty-year period between 1990 and 2020.
差別:
- shows → illustrates how ___ changed (重構句型)
- the number of tourists → tourist figures (換名詞)
- from 1990 to 2020 → over a thirty-year period between 1990 and 2020 (加細節)
Task 2 的 paraphrase
題目:Some people believe technology is making children lazy. Do you agree or disagree?
❌ 學生版
Some people believe technology is making children lazy. I agree.
完全沒 paraphrase。Intro Band 5.5。
✅ Band 7 版
There is a widely held view that the rise of digital technology is eroding children's motivation and effort. In my opinion, this concern is largely justified, though it requires some nuance.
改動:
- Some people believe → There is a widely held view that
- technology is making children lazy → the rise of digital technology is eroding children's motivation and effort
專有名詞怎麼辦
國家名、公司名、疾病名、科目名——必須照抄,不能瞎改:
- Japan 不要改成 that East Asian nation(做作)
- NHS 不要改成 UK's health service(失精準)
規則:3 字法則不適用於專有名詞。
試試看
拿一題 Task 2 題目。在空白紙上把題目重寫三個版本:
- 只換動詞
- 只換名詞
- 完全重構句型
寫完對比——哪個最自然?把它背起來當標準 paraphrase。