這個句型在台灣作文裡到處都是:
❌ As we all know, education is the foundation of society.
四個字,扣三件事:
- 預設立場——examiner 不一定同意
- 沒有資訊量——後面那句話本來就要寫,前面那串廢話
- 中式英文——native speaker 不這樣開句
Lexical Resource 從 7 掉 6。Task Response 也跟著掉。
為什麼它聽起來像中文
中文「眾所周知」是書面常用語——它的功能是訴諸共識。但英文寫作(尤其學術 / IELTS)不訴諸共識——訴諸證據或論點。
「As we all know」=「我懶得證明這件事」。批改員看到 = 扣分。
❌ Bad / ✅ Better 對照
| ❌ 中式起手 | ✅ Band 7+ 直接寫 | |----------|-----------------| | As we all know, smoking is harmful. | Smoking is harmful. | | It goes without saying that water is essential. | Water is essential to all life. | | Needless to say, education matters. | Education matters — though how it should be funded is contested. | | As is known to all, English is a global language. | English now serves as the working language of international business. |
核心原則:把「眾所周知」整個刪掉,後面的句子就直接是 Band 7+ 句。
「As we all know」家族 ban list
下面這些全部別用:
| 中式起手 | 中文直譯 | |---------|---------| | As we all know, | 眾所周知 | | It is known to all that | 眾所周知 | | As is known to all, | 眾所周知 | | It goes without saying that | 不言而喻 | | Needless to say, | 不必多說 | | Everyone knows that | 大家都知道 | | We all agree that | 大家都同意 |
如果真的想說「這是常識」怎麼辦
很簡單——直接陳述事實,讓事實本身的權威性發聲:
| 想表達 | 怎麼寫 | |--------|--------| | 醫學常識 | Medical research has long established that... | | 歷史共識 | Historians broadly agree that... | | 公開事實 | [Fact] is well documented. | | 直接事實 | (省略前綴,直接陳述) |
Quick Rewrite Drill
刪掉「眾所周知」起手,直接寫後半句(必要時擴充):
- As we all know, the internet has changed our lives.
- It goes without saying that exercise is good for health.
- Needless to say, English is important for jobs.
- As is known to all, smoking causes cancer.
- Everyone knows that pollution is a serious problem.
- We all agree that education should be free.
Answer Key
| # | ✅ 重寫 | |---|--------| | 1 | The internet has reshaped how people work, shop and stay in touch over barely three decades. | | 2 | Regular exercise lowers the risk of heart disease, diabetes and depression — three of the leading causes of premature death. | | 3 | English fluency now opens doors in industries from tourism to software, especially for workers willing to relocate. | | 4 | Smoking causes roughly one in five cancer deaths, according to public health data. | | 5 | Air pollution alone kills millions each year, with low-income cities bearing the heaviest burden. | | 6 | Whether basic education should be tuition-free divides opinion: I would argue that it must be, because access to literacy underpins every other right. |
一句總結
不要拜託 examiner 同意你——用句子本身說服他。
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