這個句型在台灣作文裡到處都是:

As we all know, education is the foundation of society.

四個字,扣三件事:

  1. 預設立場——examiner 不一定同意
  2. 沒有資訊量——後面那句話本來就要寫,前面那串廢話
  3. 中式英文——native speaker 不這樣開句

Lexical Resource 從 7 掉 6。Task Response 也跟著掉。

為什麼它聽起來像中文

中文「眾所周知」是書面常用語——它的功能是訴諸共識。但英文寫作(尤其學術 / IELTS)不訴諸共識——訴諸證據論點

「As we all know」=「我懶得證明這件事」。批改員看到 = 扣分。

❌ Bad / ✅ Better 對照

| ❌ 中式起手 | ✅ Band 7+ 直接寫 | |----------|-----------------| | As we all know, smoking is harmful. | Smoking is harmful. | | It goes without saying that water is essential. | Water is essential to all life. | | Needless to say, education matters. | Education matters — though how it should be funded is contested. | | As is known to all, English is a global language. | English now serves as the working language of international business. |

核心原則:把「眾所周知」整個刪掉,後面的句子就直接是 Band 7+ 句。

「As we all know」家族 ban list

下面這些全部別用

| 中式起手 | 中文直譯 | |---------|---------| | As we all know, | 眾所周知 | | It is known to all that | 眾所周知 | | As is known to all, | 眾所周知 | | It goes without saying that | 不言而喻 | | Needless to say, | 不必多說 | | Everyone knows that | 大家都知道 | | We all agree that | 大家都同意 |

如果真的想說「這是常識」怎麼辦

很簡單——直接陳述事實,讓事實本身的權威性發聲:

| 想表達 | 怎麼寫 | |--------|--------| | 醫學常識 | Medical research has long established that... | | 歷史共識 | Historians broadly agree that... | | 公開事實 | [Fact] is well documented. | | 直接事實 | (省略前綴,直接陳述) |

Quick Rewrite Drill

刪掉「眾所周知」起手,直接寫後半句(必要時擴充):

  1. As we all know, the internet has changed our lives.
  2. It goes without saying that exercise is good for health.
  3. Needless to say, English is important for jobs.
  4. As is known to all, smoking causes cancer.
  5. Everyone knows that pollution is a serious problem.
  6. We all agree that education should be free.

Answer Key

| # | ✅ 重寫 | |---|--------| | 1 | The internet has reshaped how people work, shop and stay in touch over barely three decades. | | 2 | Regular exercise lowers the risk of heart disease, diabetes and depression — three of the leading causes of premature death. | | 3 | English fluency now opens doors in industries from tourism to software, especially for workers willing to relocate. | | 4 | Smoking causes roughly one in five cancer deaths, according to public health data. | | 5 | Air pollution alone kills millions each year, with low-income cities bearing the heaviest burden. | | 6 | Whether basic education should be tuition-free divides opinion: I would argue that it must be, because access to literacy underpins every other right. |

一句總結

不要拜託 examiner 同意你——用句子本身說服他


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