劍橋批改員看到這句，眉毛會往上跳：

❌ In conclusion, education is very important. We should pay attention to it.

問題不是文法——文法沒錯。問題是它沒結論任何東西。它對任何題目都套得上，所以等於沒寫。Task Response 從 7.0 滑回 6.0。

為什麼這種結尾傷分

Band 7 結尾要做兩件事：

  1. 重述你的立場（不是抄回開頭）
  2. 回扣主體段的論點

「Is very important」既沒立場，也沒回扣。它只是再說一次「這個題目是個題目」。

❌ Bad / ✅ Better 對照

題目假設：Should children learn coding at school?

| ❌ 廢話結尾 | ✅ Band 7+ 結尾 | |----------|---------------| | In conclusion, coding is very important. Children should learn it. | On balance, coding belongs in primary curricula because the analytical habits it builds outlast any single language or platform. | | In a word, this issue is significant and needs attention. | While critics worry about screen time, the trade-off is worth it: a generation fluent in logic will be better placed to question the systems they live inside. | | To sum up, both sides have their advantages and disadvantages. | Although timetables are already crowded, replacing one weekly handwriting lesson with structured coding offers a low-cost route to digital literacy. | | In conclusion, the government should solve this problem. | The case for early coding is therefore not about producing junior engineers but about teaching children that machines obey rules they themselves can write. |

三種 Band 7+ 結尾模板

1. Restate position + final reason

Although [counterpoint], I maintain that ___ because, ultimately, ___.

2. Synthesise both sides（Discuss 題）

The strongest case lies between the two camps: ___ when ___, but ___ when ___.

3. Forward-looking close

Unless [policy/behaviour change], [problem] will only deepen — making [your stance] not a preference but a necessity.

結尾常見地雷

| 地雷 | 為什麼扣 | |------|---------| | 引入新論點 | Coherence 扣分（結尾只能收，不能開新戰場） | | 抄一遍開頭 | Lexical Resource 扣（重複詞彙） | | I think... I believe... I feel... 連發 | 主觀但沒理由，Task Response 扣 | | In a word / All in all（中式片語） | 不自然，Lexical Resource 扣 |

Quick Rewrite Drill

5 句廢話結尾，重寫成 Band 7+：

  1. In conclusion, environmental protection is very important and we should all do our best.
  2. To sum up, both online and traditional shopping have advantages and disadvantages.
  3. In a word, governments should pay attention to this issue.
  4. In conclusion, I think this problem is significant in modern society.
  5. All in all, education plays a vital role and is important for everyone.

Answer Key（範例改寫）

| # | ✅ Band 7+ 重寫 | |---|----------------| | 1 | Tackling environmental decline therefore demands not vague concern but enforceable rules — without them, individual goodwill simply cannot scale. | | 2 | The two formats will likely coexist: online for commodity purchases where price wins, physical stores for goods that benefit from touch and trial. | | 3 | State action is unavoidable here, since markets alone have repeatedly failed to price the long-term costs at stake. | | 4 | I therefore agree that this trend deserves direct policy attention rather than the cautious monitoring it currently receives. | | 5 | Schooling alone cannot guarantee opportunity, but its absence reliably forecloses it — which is why universal access remains the single highest-leverage investment a society can make. |

一句總結

結尾不是儀式，是最後一次說服 examiner。寫得像有人會反駁你——而你準備好回應了。

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