一篇 IELTS Task 2 作文裡出現 5 次以上 very + 形容詞——Lexical Resource 自動上限 6.0。因為這代表你詞彙廣度不夠。
為什麼是 Taiwanese 特有錯誤
中文用「很」當萬用強化詞:很好、很大、很累、很開心、很重要。學生直接翻譯成 very + 形容詞——但英文有更精準的單字。
40 組升級對照表
尺寸 / 數量
| ❌ Very + 基本字 | ✅ 升級單字 | |---------------|------------| | very big | enormous / huge / massive | | very small | tiny / minute / minuscule | | very long | extensive / lengthy | | very short | brief / concise | | very many | numerous / countless | | very few | scarce / sparse |
品質評價
| ❌ Very + 基本字 | ✅ 升級單字 | |---------------|------------| | very good | excellent / outstanding / superb | | very bad | terrible / dreadful / appalling | | very nice | delightful / wonderful | | very important | crucial / vital / essential | | very interesting | fascinating / captivating | | very boring | tedious / monotonous / dull |
情緒 / 狀態
| ❌ Very + 基本字 | ✅ 升級單字 | |---------------|------------| | very happy | delighted / thrilled / ecstatic | | very sad | miserable / devastated | | very tired | exhausted / drained | | very angry | furious / enraged | | very scared | terrified / petrified | | very surprised | astonished / stunned | | very worried | anxious / apprehensive |
程度
| ❌ Very + 基本字 | ✅ 升級單字 | |---------------|------------| | very hot | scorching / boiling | | very cold | freezing / icy | | very dry | arid / parched | | very wet | soaked / drenched | | very fast | rapid / swift | | very slow | sluggish | | very loud | deafening | | very quiet | silent |
抽象概念
| ❌ Very + 基本字 | ✅ 升級單字 | |---------------|------------| | very different | distinct / contrasting | | very similar | identical / analogous | | very easy | effortless / straightforward | | very difficult | challenging / demanding | | very dangerous | hazardous / perilous | | very safe | secure | | very clever | brilliant / ingenious | | very stupid | foolish / absurd |
使用原則
原則 1:不是「越文言越好」
如果全篇都是 ecstatic / petrified / ingenious——看起來像查字典亂塞。整篇挑 3-4 個高級字,其他保留一般用字。
原則 2:別完全禁 very
Band 7 不是「不准用 very」,是「別過度用 very」。整篇 Task 2 用 2 次 very 是自然的。5 次以上就有問題。
原則 3:換字要確認語氣
very good 在口語可以替換成 fantastic,但在正式作文該用 excellent / outstanding。
五個段落級升級範例
| ❌ Band 6 | ✅ Band 7+ | |----------|-----------| | Climate change is a very big problem. | Climate change is a pressing global issue. | | The research shows very important results. | The research reveals significant findings. | | Young people are very interested in technology. | Young people are deeply engaged with technology. | | The film was very good and very interesting. | The film was captivating from start to finish. | | This policy is very bad for poor people. | This policy is particularly harmful to low-income households. |
Quick Drill — 升級這些句子
- The city is very big.
- She was very happy to see him.
- The exam was very difficult.
- It was very cold yesterday.
- Her performance was very good.
- The noise is very loud.
- He looked very tired.
- This book is very interesting.
- The road was very dangerous.
- The soup is very hot.
Suggested Answers
| # | 升級 | |---|------| | 1 | The city is enormous / sprawling. | | 2 | She was delighted / thrilled to see him. | | 3 | The exam was demanding / challenging. | | 4 | It was freezing yesterday. | | 5 | Her performance was outstanding / superb. | | 6 | The noise is deafening. | | 7 | He looked exhausted / drained. | | 8 | This book is fascinating / captivating. | | 9 | The road was hazardous / treacherous. | | 10 | The soup is scalding / piping hot. |
一個練習習慣
每週寫完一篇 Task 2,搜 "very"——每個 very 都強迫自己想一個升級字。三個月後,very 自動從你的筆下消失。
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