食物題的隱藏陷阱——把它當夜市清單講("There's stinky tofu, oyster omelette, beef noodle...")。Part 1 可以這樣,Part 2 不行。Part 2 要講一頓具體的飯——一個場景、一個人、一個瞬間。
題目卡
Describe a meal that you enjoyed cooking or eating.
You should say:
- what the meal was
- when and where you had it
- who you were with
- and explain why you enjoyed it.
POWER 一分鐘筆記
| POWER | 關鍵字 | 中文註 | |-------|--------|--------| | People | me cooking, parents eating, age 24 | 角色 | | Occasion | parents' first visit to my Taipei flat | 場景 | | What | three-cup chicken, tofu soup, stir-fried greens | 菜色 | | Emotion | nervous, then proud when dad asked for seconds | 情緒弧線 | | Reflection | first time I cooked for them, role reversal | 意義 |
完整範答(295 字)
¹ A meal that I particularly enjoyed cooking was the first dinner I made for my parents in my own apartment, about a year and a half after I'd moved out for my first job in Taipei. ² I'd lived on noodles and convenience-store rice balls up to that point, so cooking an actual three-dish dinner felt like a serious step up.
³ The menu was deliberately simple — three-cup chicken, a basic silken tofu and seaweed soup, and stir-fried water spinach with garlic. ⁴ Nothing showy, just food my mother had grown up making and that I'd watched her cook a thousand times without ever paying proper attention. ⁵ I went to the wet market that morning, spent about forty minutes choosing the chicken with a stall owner who clearly recognised an amateur and quietly upgraded my pieces, and got home with much more basil than I needed.
⁶ Cooking it was genuinely stressful. ⁷ The kitchen in my flat is barely large enough for one person, and the timing of three dishes is harder than it sounds — I'd never had to think about what came out of the wok in what order. ⁸ I burnt the garlic on the first attempt and had to start that dish over.
⁹ When my parents finally sat down, my dad — who's not a man given to compliments — quietly took a second helping of the chicken without saying anything, which is roughly his version of a five-star review. ¹⁰ I think what I enjoyed most wasn't the food itself; it was the small role reversal. ¹¹ For the first time in twenty-four years, my mother was a guest at the table, and I was the one in the apron.
句句解析
- 句 1 (Meal + scene): "the first dinner I made for my parents in my own apartment" — 具體場景,after I'd moved out 用 past perfect。
- 句 2 (Self-deprecating context): "lived on noodles and convenience-store rice balls" — 反差鋪墊。
- 句 3 (Menu — list): "three-cup chicken, silken tofu soup, stir-fried water spinach" — 三道菜並列,菜名專業度。
- 句 4 (Emotional weight): "food my mother had grown up making and that I'd watched her cook a thousand times" — past perfect continuous。
- 句 5 (具體動作敘事): "forty minutes choosing the chicken with a stall owner who quietly upgraded my pieces" — 關係子句 + quietly 副詞精準。
- 句 6 (短句節奏): "Cooking it was genuinely stressful." — 短句切換。
- 句 7 (Detail + 內心): "I'd never had to think about what came out of the wok in what order" — past perfect + indirect question。
- 句 8 (錯誤承認): "I burnt the garlic on the first attempt" — 真實感。
- 句 9 (高潮 — relative clause + 引述意涵): "my dad — who's not a man given to compliments — took a second helping... which is roughly his version of a five-star review" — dash 從句 + 比喻。
- 句 10 (Reframe — what I enjoyed): "wasn't the food; it was the role reversal" — not X but Y。
- 句 11 (Landing): "my mother was a guest at the table, and I was the one in the apron" — 對比意象。
Band 7 評分證據
- Grammar: past perfect / past perfect continuous / dash relative clauses / not X it was Y 對比
- Lexical: three-cup chicken, silken tofu, water spinach, wet market, role reversal, given to compliments
- Cohesion: 時間軸 that morning / when they sat down / for the first time
- Cultural authenticity: 三杯雞、傳統市場——在地細節評分員加分
3 個可替換 Hook
Hook A — 在外吃過的一餐
A meal I really enjoyed eating was a quiet lunch at a tiny ramen shop in Kyoto, on the second day of a solo trip I took two years ago. The restaurant only seated about eight people at a counter, and the chef worked entirely in silence.
Hook B — 朋友家
A meal that's stayed with me was a hotpot dinner at my best friend's grandmother's house in Tainan, the winter we both turned twenty. There were eleven of us crammed around a small round table, and I didn't speak Taiwanese well enough to follow most of the jokes.
Hook C — 失敗但珍貴
The meal I most enjoyed cooking was actually a failure — a Christmas roast chicken I attempted for my flatmates during my exchange year in the UK. The bird came out slightly underdone in the middle, and the gravy was lumpy.
替換鐵律:食物題不要列菜單。選一頓飯——具體哪一天、哪一張桌子、誰在場、誰說了一句什麼話。情緒比味道值錢。