地方題考生最常踩的坑——選「巴黎」「東京」然後講得跟旅遊雜誌一樣。高分解法:選一個你能講出具體活動的地方,而不是「著名地標」。
題目卡
Describe a place you would like to visit in the future.
You should say:
- where it is
- how you heard about it
- what you would do there
- and explain why you want to visit this place.
POWER 一分鐘筆記
| POWER | 關鍵字 | 中文註 | |-------|--------|--------| | Place | Iceland, Reykjavik + Ring Road | 不是熱門觀光地 = 加分 | | Occasion | saw Instagram photo during pandemic | 「怎麼知道」要具體 | | What | northern lights, geothermal pools, drive Ring Road | 3 個具體活動 | | Emotion | longing, quiet excitement | 情緒形容詞 | | Reflection | need space/silence after Taipei noise | 為什麼想去的深層原因 |
完整範答(300 字)
¹ The place I'd most love to visit in the next few years is Iceland — specifically the capital Reykjavik and the Ring Road that loops all the way around the entire country. ² It's been on my wish list for about four years now, ever since a friend of mine posted a photo on Instagram during the pandemic of a tiny orange cabin sitting alone against a completely black volcanic landscape. ³ I remember thinking at the time that it looked like another planet entirely.
⁴ The first thing I'd do is rent a small camper van and drive the full Ring Road — it's roughly 1,300 kilometres and takes about a week at a relaxed pace. ⁵ Along the way I'd stop at the famous waterfalls like Seljalandsfoss and Skógafoss, sleep overnight in farm-stays that offer basic accommodation, and spend at least two nights in the east fjords hoping to catch a glimpse of the northern lights. ⁶ I'd also prioritise the geothermal pools — not the heavily crowded Blue Lagoon, but the smaller, locally run ones where you soak with half a dozen Icelanders in near total silence.
⁷ The reason I want to go is honestly quite simple — I crave the kind of emptiness that a city like Taipei never really gives you. ⁸ Living in a city of two-and-a-half million people, I've realised I'm increasingly starved for quiet, for dark skies, and for landscapes that don't contain other humans. ⁹ Iceland has a population roughly the size of Taichung spread across an area half the size of Taiwan; the sheer scale of the empty space is, in itself, the attraction for me.
¹⁰ I'd also love to experience the midnight sun in June, or conversely the long polar darkness of December. ¹¹ It would be a completely different relationship with time, and I think that kind of disorientation might be exactly what I need.
句句解析
- 句 1 (Place + specificity): "— specifically the capital Reykjavik and the Ring Road" — dash 精確化,展示你做過功課。
- 句 2 (How you heard — texture): "a friend posted a photo during the pandemic of a tiny orange cabin against a completely black volcanic landscape" — 具體畫面,像電影鏡頭。
- 句 3 (Reaction): "I remember thinking it looked like another planet." — 短句收,節奏變化。
- 句 4 (What — Activity 1 + 數字): "roughly 1,300 kilometres... a week at a relaxed pace" — 具體距離、時長。
- 句 5 (列舉三件事): "stop at the famous waterfalls... sleep in farms... spend at least two nights..." — 平行動詞片語。
- 句 6 (轉折 + 深度細節): "not the crowded Blue Lagoon, but the smaller, locally run ones" — 反觀光 = 展示你不是在背旅遊書。
- 句 7 (Why — 核心): "I crave the kind of emptiness that Taipei never gives you" — crave 比 want 強烈,關係子句。
- 句 8 (對比 + 形容詞組): "starved for quiet, dark skies, and landscapes that don't contain other humans" — starved 接 for,三項列舉。
- 句 9 (具體比例): "the size of Taichung spread across an area half the size of Taiwan" — 用台灣作比例,接地氣又具體。
- 句 10 (對比意象): "the midnight sun in June, or conversely the long darkness of December" — conversely 是高階連詞。
- 句 11 (Philosophical landing): "a completely different relationship with time" — 抽象化收尾,Band 7+。
Band 7 評分證據
- Lexical: camper van, geothermal pools, fjords, midnight sun, starved for, crave, disorientation
- Grammar: 關係子句、平行動詞片語、not X but Y 對比、conversely
- Cohesion: POWER 段落功能清楚,dash 與逗號節奏有變化
3 個可替換 Hook
Hook A — 都市愛好者
The city I most want to visit is Istanbul. I'm drawn to places where continents meet, and the idea of a city that's literally split between Europe and Asia fascinates me.
Hook B — 回鄉 / 母國角度
Although I've lived in Taiwan my whole life, there's one place here I've never actually been — Lanyu, or Orchid Island. It sits about 70 kilometres off the east coast, and I've heard it described as the Taiwan you don't know exists.
Hook C — 靈性 / 朝聖
The place at the top of my list is Kyoto in autumn. I've been to Tokyo twice, but Kyoto is a different proposition — an entire city built around temples, old wooden houses and careful seasonal rituals.
替換鐵律:不要說「我想去因為漂亮 / 有名」。說「我想去因為 [一個你生活中缺少的東西]」——例如 emptiness, pace, strangeness, spirituality。這樣才不空洞。