「想學技能」題的隱藏考點——未來式與條件句的靈活切換。很多考生全程 I will... I will...,語法單一。Band 7+ 要混用 be planning to / hope to / would like to / if I had the time I would... 這幾種句型。
題目卡
Describe a skill you would like to learn in the future.
You should say:
- what the skill is
- why you want to learn it
- how you plan to learn it
- and explain why this skill is important to you.
POWER 一分鐘筆記
| POWER | 關鍵字 | 中文註 | |-------|--------|--------| | Product | scuba diving (PADI Open Water) | 具體課程名 = 加分 | | Occasion | snorkelled in Green Island last summer | 「動機從哪來」 | | What | weekend course in Kenting, 4 days | 具體計畫 | | Emotion | mix of nervous + excited, fear of depth | 真實情緒 | | Reflection | want to confront fear + see the 70% of planet that's ocean | 深層動機 |
完整範答(295 字)
¹ The skill I'd most like to pick up within the next year or two is scuba diving — specifically the PADI Open Water certification, which is the basic qualification that lets you dive independently down to a depth of about eighteen metres. ² It's been on my mind ever since I went snorkelling off the coast of Green Island last summer and got my first proper glimpse of what was actually happening just below the surface.
³ I'm planning to sign up for a four-day intensive course in Kenting, probably during the Chinese New Year break when I'll have a proper block of time off work. ⁴ The course covers theory — basic physics, safety procedures, hand signals — followed by confined-water sessions in a swimming pool and, finally, four genuine open-water dives in the sea itself. ⁵ If I pass, I'd like to follow it up with an Advanced Open Water certification maybe a year later, which would let me go deeper and also do night dives.
⁶ The main reason I want to learn this skill is honestly a mix of curiosity and fear. ⁷ I've been mildly uncomfortable around deep water since I was a child, and I've reached the point where I'd rather confront that anxiety head-on than spend the rest of my life carefully avoiding it. ⁸ There's also a bigger reason behind it — about seventy per cent of the planet is underwater, and it feels like a real shame to go through an entire lifetime only ever seeing the top three metres of it.
⁹ Long-term, I'd love to dive places like Palau or the Great Barrier Reef before climate change makes them unrecognisable. ¹⁰ But honestly, just being able to float calmly at ten metres and breathe slowly would already feel like a small personal victory to me.
句句解析
- 句 1 (Skill + specificity): "the PADI Open Water certification, which is..." — 關係子句解釋,展示你真的查過。
- 句 2 (Origin — concrete event): "ever since I went snorkelling off Green Island last summer" — 具體觸發點。
- 句 3 (Plan — future continuous / be planning to): "I'm planning to sign up... when I'll have a proper block of time off" — 多個未來式型態混用。
- 句 4 (具體內容列舉): "theory... confined-water sessions... four open-water dives" — 三段式課程描述。
- 句 5 (Conditional + future): "If I pass, I'd like to follow it up... which would let me..." — 第一條件句 + would。
- 句 6 (Pivot to motivation): "a mix of curiosity and fear" — 誠實反套路。
- 句 7 (Self-reflection): "I'd rather confront that anxiety directly than spend the rest of my life avoiding it" — would rather... than... 句型。
- 句 8 (Bigger-picture reason): "about seventy per cent of the planet is underwater" — 引入數據,把個人動機放大。
- 句 9 (Long-term + environmental): "before climate change makes them unrecognisable" — 加入時代背景。
- 句 10 (Humble landing): "just being able to float calmly at ten metres and breathe slowly..." — 回到具體、謙遜的目標,情感收尾。
Band 7 評分證據
- Grammar: would like to, I'm planning to, if I pass I'd like to, would rather... than, before [clause]
- Lexical: PADI certification, confined water, hand signals, unrecognisable, curiosity and fear
- Task Response: 四個 bullet 全部涵蓋(what / why / how / importance)
3 個可替換 Hook
Hook A — 語言
The skill I'd love to learn properly is Spanish. I picked up the basics on Duolingo during lockdown, but I've hit a ceiling where I can read a menu but can't actually hold a conversation.
Hook B — 音樂
Something I've wanted to learn for years is the ukulele. It's not a glamorous choice, but it's portable, forgiving for beginners, and — crucially for someone with my attention span — you can play a recognisable song after about two weeks.
Hook C — 實用
The skill on my list is basic welding. It might sound odd coming from someone who works in an office, but I've become interested in fixing and building things myself — and welding is the gateway to a whole category of projects I currently can't attempt.
替換原則:技能題選「你真的計畫過、能講出報名費 / 課程長度 / 第一步」的技能。不要選「彈鋼琴」這種含糊的東西。