「欽佩的人」是 Part 2 最高頻的題型——出現率大約每四次就一次。考生常犯的錯是選太大的人物(Elon Musk、愛因斯坦)結果講得空洞、像百科。高分解法——選一個你真的熟的人,用具體動作證明你為什麼欽佩。

題目卡

Describe a person you admire.

You should say:

  • who this person is
  • how you know them
  • what qualities they have
  • and explain why you admire them.

POWER 一分鐘筆記(考試現場真的會寫的量)

| POWER | 關鍵字(考場寫這麼多就夠) | 中文註 | |-------|----------------------------|--------| | Person | grandma — Chen A-Mei, 78 | 選最熟的人,細節最多 | | Occasion | grew up with her, Taitung | 「怎麼認識的」——同住 16 年 | | What | ran small noodle stall, raised 3 kids alone | 1-2 個具體事件就夠 | | Emotion | quiet strength, never complained | 形容詞要 specific | | Reflection | taught me resilience, still calls every Sunday | 延伸到「對我的影響」 |

一分鐘筆記的鐵律:只寫「英文關鍵字」,不寫完整句。完整句留到開口時現場組裝——這樣才 natural。

完整範答(295 字)

¹ The person I most admire is my paternal grandmother, Chen A-Mei, who's now 78 and still lives in the small town in Taitung where I grew up. ² I know her not so much as a relative but as the woman who practically raised me — my parents worked in Taipei, so from the age of two until I started high school, her house was home, and I spent almost every summer and most weekends there as well.

³ What makes her remarkable isn't anything dramatic or the kind of thing you'd put in a biography. After my grandfather died of a stroke in his early forties, she ran a small beef-noodle stall by herself for nearly thirty years, raising three children on what a single bowl of noodles at forty New Taiwan dollars could earn. She was up at four every morning to simmer the broth from scratch, and she never once complained about the hours or the aching legs — she simply treated hard work as something that needed doing.

The quality I admire most is her quiet resilience. She isn't the sort of person who gives speeches or hands out advice; she teaches by example and lets you draw your own conclusions. I watched her handle a cancer diagnosis in her late sixties with the same steady, unhurried attitude she brought to a busy lunchtime rush — just deal with what's in front of you, and keep going.

I admire her because she showed me what hard work and dignity actually look like, long before I was old enough to understand either. ¹⁰ Every time I feel sorry for myself over a deadline or a minor setback, I think of her standing over that stove at dawn, and whatever I'm complaining about suddenly seems very small. ¹¹ She still calls me every Sunday without fail, and honestly, those ten-minute phone calls have shaped me more than any teacher ever has.

句句解析

  • 句 1 (Who + 具體細節): "my paternal grandmother, Chen A-Mei, who's now 78..." — 名字 + 年齡 + 地點。一句話四個具體細節,Band 7 開場。
  • 句 2 (How you know them — 升級版): "not so much as a relative but as the woman who practically raised me"not so much A as B 是高階對比句型。
  • 句 3 (Pivot): "What makes her remarkable isn't anything dramatic." — 反預期,吸引注意力。
  • 句 4 (具體事件 + 數字): "for nearly thirty years... on what a single bowl of noodles could earn" — 具體時間長度 + 具體金額感,Lexical + Task Response 一起拿分。
  • 句 5 (感官細節): "up at four every morning to simmer the broth" — 具體動作 simmercook 精準得多。
  • 句 6 (Qualities topic): "quiet resilience" — 形容詞組,比單講 strong 有層次。
  • 句 7 (對比修辭): "isn't the sort of person who gives speeches... teaches by example" — 用否定先說「她不是什麼」再說「她是什麼」。
  • 句 8 (延伸 quality 的具體證據): "handled a cancer diagnosis... with the same calm attitude she brought to a busy lunchtime" — 把抽象的 resilience 用具體情境證明。
  • 句 9 (Why you admire — 核心): "showed me what hard work actually looks like" — 不說「她很努力」,說「她讓我看到努力長什麼樣」。
  • 句 10 (Personal reflection): "Every time I feel sorry for myself..." — 連結到「對我的影響」,評分員愛這種自我連結。
  • 句 11 (Emotional landing): "those ten-minute phone calls have shaped me more than any teacher ever has" — 強收尾,比較句型。

Band 7 評分證據

  • Fluency & Coherence: POWER 五段分明,pivot (句 3) 轉得自然
  • Lexical Resource: paternal, quiet resilience, simmer, cancer diagnosis, shaped — 精準動詞與形容詞組
  • Grammar Range: relative clause (who practically raised me)、not-so-much 對比、every-time 從句
  • Pronunciation: 這類敘事題語調自然下降,考官容易給高分

3 個可替換的 Hook(個人化你的版本)

Hook A — 選老師(適合學生)

The person I most admire is my eighth-grade English teacher, Mr. Liu. He wasn't the most qualified teacher in the school — he'd trained as an engineer before switching careers — but he was easily the most committed.

Hook B — 選父母(適合工作族)

Probably the person I admire most is my mother. It's a bit of a cliché answer, but I genuinely mean it — and the reason has nothing to do with her being my mum.

Hook C — 選非家人(讓範答顯得不套路)

There's a woman in our neighbourhood, Auntie Wang, who runs the small recycling station at the end of our lane. She's probably in her seventies, and most people walk past without noticing her — but she's one of the people I admire most.

替換小撇步:保留「具體職業 + 具體年齡 + 一個令人意外的事實」這個三段式結構就好。


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