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題目卡
Describe a famous person you would like to meet.
You should say:
- who the person is
- what they are famous for
- what you know about them
- and explain why you would like to meet them.
POWER 一分鐘筆記
| POWER | 關鍵字 | 中文註 | |-------|--------|--------| | Person | Haruki Murakami, 75, Japanese novelist | 具體年齡 + 國籍 | | Occasion | read Norwegian Wood at 19, hooked ever since | 你怎麼認識他 | | What | author of Norwegian Wood, Kafka on the Shore, runner | 作品 + 意外側面 | | Emotion | curious, a little intimidated | 坦承情緒 | | Reflection | want to ask about discipline, loneliness of writing | 想問什麼 |
完整範答(308 字)
¹ The famous person I'd most like to meet is the Japanese novelist Haruki Murakami — I imagine he's on a lot of people's lists, but my reasons are fairly specific. ² He's now in his mid-seventies, has written more than a dozen novels including Norwegian Wood and Kafka on the Shore, and is probably Japan's most translated living writer.
³ I first read Norwegian Wood at nineteen, during my first year at university, and it did something to me that very few books have done since — it made loneliness feel like an ordinary human condition rather than a personal failing. ⁴ I've since read almost everything he's written in translation, including his memoir What I Talk About When I Talk About Running, which is partly about how he trains for marathons and partly about the discipline required to write a novel.
⁵ If I could meet him, I wouldn't want a literary interview. ⁶ I'd want to ask about the small, concrete habits — what time he gets up, whether he still swims, how he handles the stretches where the writing just isn't going well. ⁷ He's famously private and reportedly quite shy, so I imagine even five minutes of honest conversation would be difficult to come by.
⁸ The deeper reason I want to meet him is that he's one of the few public figures who has written openly about the loneliness of creative work without romanticising it. ⁹ I've spent the last three years trying to write fiction seriously in my spare time, and most of the advice available online is either too vague or too performative. ¹⁰ Five minutes with someone who has done it for forty-five years, who treats writing as a craft rather than a calling, would be worth more than any writing course I could pay for.
句句解析
- 句 1 (Name + self-aware 修辭): "I imagine he's on a lot of people's lists, but my reasons are fairly specific" — 預擋「俗套」批評。
- 句 2 (Bio — 具體): 年齡 + 作品 + 國際地位,一句話三個資訊。
- 句 3 (First encounter): "it made loneliness feel like an ordinary human condition rather than a personal failing" — A rather than B 結構,抽象主題句。
- 句 4 (Depth of familiarity): "his memoir What I Talk About When I Talk About Running, which is partly about... and partly about..." — 關係子句 + partly / partly 平行。
- 句 5 (Pivot — second conditional): "If I could meet him, I wouldn't want a literary interview." — 第二條件句,展示 grammar range。
- 句 6 (具體想問的問題): "what time he gets up, whether he still swims, how he handles..." — 三個 indirect questions,平行結構。
- 句 7 (Realistic concession): "he's famously private... five minutes of honest conversation would be difficult to come by" — 承認現實,反而顯得成熟。
- 句 8 (Why — 深層): "one of the few public figures who has written openly about... without romanticising it" — without + gerund 結構。
- 句 9 (個人連結): "the last three years trying to write fiction seriously in my spare time" — 自我脈絡。
- 句 10 (Final reframe): "someone who has done it for forty-five years, who treats writing as a craft rather than a calling" — 雙 relative clause 收尾。
Band 7 評分證據
- Grammar: second conditional (if I could... I wouldn't want...)、關係子句疊加、indirect questions、without romanticising
- Lexical: famously private, romanticising, performative, craft rather than calling, worth more than
- Task Response: who / what famous for / what you know / why — 四個 bullet 完整
- Pronunciation: 書名 Norwegian Wood, Kafka on the Shore 稍加強調即可
3 個可替換 Hook
Hook A — 科學家(反主流)
The famous person I'd most like to meet is the primatologist Jane Goodall. She's now in her nineties and still travels roughly three hundred days a year to give talks on conservation — which, honestly, is remarkable in itself.
Hook B — 運動員(選「退役後」的角度)
If I could meet any famous person, it would be the retired Taiwanese baseball player Chien-Ming Wang. He was the first Taiwanese pitcher to win a World Series, but the reason I'd want to meet him is actually how he handled his injury and comeback — which got much less coverage than his peak years.
Hook C — 已故的人物(加 would-have 結構)
The person I'd most have loved to meet is Anthony Bourdain, the American chef and travel writer, who died in 2018. His show Parts Unknown changed how I think about food and places — he treated food as a way into cultures, not the other way around.
替換鐵律:名人題千萬別選「太正確」的人(科學天才、首富、超級球星)。選一個你能引用一句話 / 一個具體決定的人,答題密度立刻上升兩個 band。
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