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題目卡

Describe a famous person you would like to meet.

You should say:

  • who the person is
  • what they are famous for
  • what you know about them
  • and explain why you would like to meet them.

POWER 一分鐘筆記

| POWER | 關鍵字 | 中文註 | |-------|--------|--------| | Person | Haruki Murakami, 75, Japanese novelist | 具體年齡 + 國籍 | | Occasion | read Norwegian Wood at 19, hooked ever since | 你怎麼認識他 | | What | author of Norwegian Wood, Kafka on the Shore, runner | 作品 + 意外側面 | | Emotion | curious, a little intimidated | 坦承情緒 | | Reflection | want to ask about discipline, loneliness of writing | 想問什麼 |

完整範答(308 字)

¹ The famous person I'd most like to meet is the Japanese novelist Haruki Murakami — I imagine he's on a lot of people's lists, but my reasons are fairly specific. ² He's now in his mid-seventies, has written more than a dozen novels including Norwegian Wood and Kafka on the Shore, and is probably Japan's most translated living writer.

³ I first read Norwegian Wood at nineteen, during my first year at university, and it did something to me that very few books have done since — it made loneliness feel like an ordinary human condition rather than a personal failing. I've since read almost everything he's written in translation, including his memoir What I Talk About When I Talk About Running, which is partly about how he trains for marathons and partly about the discipline required to write a novel.

If I could meet him, I wouldn't want a literary interview. I'd want to ask about the small, concrete habits — what time he gets up, whether he still swims, how he handles the stretches where the writing just isn't going well. He's famously private and reportedly quite shy, so I imagine even five minutes of honest conversation would be difficult to come by.

The deeper reason I want to meet him is that he's one of the few public figures who has written openly about the loneliness of creative work without romanticising it. I've spent the last three years trying to write fiction seriously in my spare time, and most of the advice available online is either too vague or too performative. ¹⁰ Five minutes with someone who has done it for forty-five years, who treats writing as a craft rather than a calling, would be worth more than any writing course I could pay for.

句句解析

  • 句 1 (Name + self-aware 修辭): "I imagine he's on a lot of people's lists, but my reasons are fairly specific" — 預擋「俗套」批評。
  • 句 2 (Bio — 具體): 年齡 + 作品 + 國際地位,一句話三個資訊。
  • 句 3 (First encounter): "it made loneliness feel like an ordinary human condition rather than a personal failing"A rather than B 結構,抽象主題句。
  • 句 4 (Depth of familiarity): "his memoir What I Talk About When I Talk About Running, which is partly about... and partly about..." — 關係子句 + partly / partly 平行。
  • 句 5 (Pivot — second conditional): "If I could meet him, I wouldn't want a literary interview." — 第二條件句,展示 grammar range。
  • 句 6 (具體想問的問題): "what time he gets up, whether he still swims, how he handles..." — 三個 indirect questions,平行結構。
  • 句 7 (Realistic concession): "he's famously private... five minutes of honest conversation would be difficult to come by" — 承認現實,反而顯得成熟。
  • 句 8 (Why — 深層): "one of the few public figures who has written openly about... without romanticising it"without + gerund 結構。
  • 句 9 (個人連結): "the last three years trying to write fiction seriously in my spare time" — 自我脈絡。
  • 句 10 (Final reframe): "someone who has done it for forty-five years, who treats writing as a craft rather than a calling" — 雙 relative clause 收尾。

Band 7 評分證據

  • Grammar: second conditional (if I could... I wouldn't want...)、關係子句疊加、indirect questions、without romanticising
  • Lexical: famously private, romanticising, performative, craft rather than calling, worth more than
  • Task Response: who / what famous for / what you know / why — 四個 bullet 完整
  • Pronunciation: 書名 Norwegian Wood, Kafka on the Shore 稍加強調即可

3 個可替換 Hook

Hook A — 科學家(反主流)

The famous person I'd most like to meet is the primatologist Jane Goodall. She's now in her nineties and still travels roughly three hundred days a year to give talks on conservation — which, honestly, is remarkable in itself.

Hook B — 運動員(選「退役後」的角度)

If I could meet any famous person, it would be the retired Taiwanese baseball player Chien-Ming Wang. He was the first Taiwanese pitcher to win a World Series, but the reason I'd want to meet him is actually how he handled his injury and comeback — which got much less coverage than his peak years.

Hook C — 已故的人物(加 would-have 結構)

The person I'd most have loved to meet is Anthony Bourdain, the American chef and travel writer, who died in 2018. His show Parts Unknown changed how I think about food and places — he treated food as a way into cultures, not the other way around.

替換鐵律:名人題千萬別選「太正確」的人(科學天才、首富、超級球星)。選一個你能引用一句話 / 一個具體決定的人,答題密度立刻上升兩個 band。


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